Church Song...rough studio cut

A couple weeks back i posted some new lyrics I'd written for an upcoming song and recording project I'm doing. I've posted the lyrics below again, but please enjoy the tune! I know its still rough (vocals especially), but here's just a few studio and instrumental ideas I have for it. (Please chime in if something's wreaking havoc on your ears...)

CHURCH SONG
(c) 2009 Ross Christopher Donaldson

(VERSE)
When there's loneliness abounding
And there's hate across the land
We are the church song

When the death of nations rise
And the world is stuck in war
We are the church song

When there's sickness and crying
And gnashing of teeth
We are the church song

And when there's sad eyes
In every man, woman, and child
We are the church song

(CHORUS)
Cause we are the church song
the voice of the people
the cry for justice
salvation is near

Yeah, we are the church song
united and ready
peace in our bloodstream
and love on our tongues
We are the church song

BRIDGE
We sing Alleluia,
songs of mercy
love in every breath

-Ross